It's Not Want, It's Need

It's Not Want, It's Need

A Poem by bringthestoke

I bleed to know I'm alive,
I cry to remind myself that I have eyes
I listen to my heart to know its beating
I whisper to myself to know I'm still hearing
I close my eyes to feel them still tearing,
I grab my phone with my wounds still searing
I dial seven digits to know I'll be okay,
I let the dial tone ring out through my brain
I plead for an answer,
My body's like a wrestler, but my heart's like a ballerina dancer
I know I'll be okay,
Since you picked up the phone
"Hello?"
Is all you needed to say

© 2015 bringthestoke


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Fay
Read this like three times so so good

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bringthestoke

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
you know exactly how I feel about rhyming (in case you forgot, I LOVE it) and I find this one particularly pretty. I like the shape of the poem itself, the theme and of course the flow. You can call me ANY time at all.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bringthestoke

9 Years Ago

Thank you darling, I just felt really thankful to know I can always count on you so I thought I'd ex.. read more

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bringthestoke
bringthestoke

North Attleboro, MA



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17, USA. Skateboarder. I write poetry and songs. Don't leave me to dwell in my own mind. more..

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