Tampered Temper

Tampered Temper

A Poem by bringthestoke
"

You made me this way...

"
I used to be so glad
To have you by my side
Then you left me for another guy
Wipe the tears from my face
I'm not one to cry
My throat swells
I'm choking out this line if you couldn't tell
This is just a sad spell
Forget about you soon enough then all is well
But memories of you still linger
I love the feeling of pain you left
I touch my skin 
and the sting from your fingers still lingers.

You caused me so much heartache
Pushed me to the point of break
F*****g christ, I still remember that night
You were breathtaking
And my hands were shaking
I asked you for forever
Then you left me in the past
Happen for f*****g bid,
I thought we would last
'I never mistreated you once
I dove into the opportunity
But the water was shallow
I hit the ocean floor
Drowning, I realized
You weren't mine anymore

But you weren't done with me,
You dragged me to the deep end
I was hopin' for your heart to send
But my bones were startin' to bend
I was struggling back to surface too fast
And you held me down
I exploded from the inside-out
So I guess this spill is me sendin' out
A message to all of you,
Trynna win the love game-
Proceed with caution
Cuz if you get too attached,
And she leaves your a*s,
You'll never be the same.

© 2014 bringthestoke


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love this! Your voice is so clear and it screams of adolescent angst.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite a sad piece but it was wonderfully written. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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bringthestoke
bringthestoke

North Attleboro, MA



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17, USA. Skateboarder. I write poetry and songs. Don't leave me to dwell in my own mind. more..

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