The Review Less Traveled By

The Review Less Traveled By

A Poem by bringthestoke
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The Review Less Traveled By

It’s gotten to the point

Where I had to leave this joint

There’s no reason to be here anymore

I no longer care about the grade or the score

I’m not writing for this class anymore

I don’t mind your review, thank you

But I really am aiming for hers

I indulge in her opinions

Of my writing

The way she

Gets me

Like literally

no other

I don’t write this

Asking myself

What can I do with this?

Will this get me anywhere in life?

It’s

What will she think of this?

How will she like this?

Will she get the concept?

I don’t write for me

Or for you

I write for her

And that

Has made all the difference


© 2014 bringthestoke


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This is seriously one of the most creative things I have read. Really amazing, can' t wait to read more!

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bringthestoke
bringthestoke

North Attleboro, MA



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17, USA. Skateboarder. I write poetry and songs. Don't leave me to dwell in my own mind. more..

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