My Silence/ Your Noise

This is an opposite poem. Read the first line of the first poem, the first line of the second poem, the second line of the first poem, the second line of the second poem and so on.

Thoughtful                    Mindless
Silence                         Noise
Fills up                         Fills up
More than                    Less than
Mindless                      Thoughtful
Noise                          Silence
Thoughts so                 Words so
Full                             Empty
Mean everything          Mean nothing
Broad mind                  Broad mouth
Ideas flow                    Ideas stop
Free and smooth          Heavy and blocked
Loud mouth                 Quiet lips
Ideas stop                   Ideas flow
Heavy and blocked       Free and smooth
My silence                  Your noise

Reviews

[Jupiter]

Brilliant!!! I have never read a poem like this and I am floored at its simplicity. It was a beautiful piece that invoked an emotion within me. Great job on this, Bri!

[Bri]

Thank you, Jupiter :) Opposite poems aren't very common but they're definitely one of my favorite types!