Turn of the Tides

Turn of the Tides

A Poem by Brim
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I was just spouting some random nonsense onto paper and when I rearanged it it becam this!

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I know
You'll never notice me
But if you
Just happen to see
A splash of clothes
A flash of hair
I hope you'll know
It's me thats there
I may stay in
The shadows all day
But you know
I love when you say
Who's there
Hello
That's how
I know
January to December
Every day I've said
You think of me
Even though I'm dead

© 2015 Brim


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the ending was...unexpected......but love it
has a certain "sad but there's hope" vibe
keep up the good work o/

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats really cool, the twist and the ending was so great! loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brim
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Hey guys! I'm a sophmore in highschool and I absolutely loooove writing. And drawing. And dancing. Well, in private. Heh... I might not be the best at grammer and punctuation and spelling but I rea.. more..

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