I'm not sure i get it but if i had to give a title to this, i would name it "Sweet static melody", sounds to me like it's about someone [artificial someone] who lives to the fullest in concordance with society rules, trying to fit in yet trying to stand out, a normal "i wanna be someone" life, however this person seems to realize the meaningless of all of it on the last part, but he/she is still trying to hide this, and again still, he or she, cannot run away from it, she/he understands how small she/he is, but will he go back to the first part and repeat the cycle once morning comes? Most of us do, because fitting in society and being artificial is easier than stepping out of the system.
Anyways good one
I'm thinking the "I am from" is transmiting something i'm failing to catch
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I appreciate the review, but this poem actually is based on my personal events that I've experienced.. read moreI appreciate the review, but this poem actually is based on my personal events that I've experienced through life. I do like how you described the poem inn your perspective!
I'm not sure i get it but if i had to give a title to this, i would name it "Sweet static melody", sounds to me like it's about someone [artificial someone] who lives to the fullest in concordance with society rules, trying to fit in yet trying to stand out, a normal "i wanna be someone" life, however this person seems to realize the meaningless of all of it on the last part, but he/she is still trying to hide this, and again still, he or she, cannot run away from it, she/he understands how small she/he is, but will he go back to the first part and repeat the cycle once morning comes? Most of us do, because fitting in society and being artificial is easier than stepping out of the system.
Anyways good one
I'm thinking the "I am from" is transmiting something i'm failing to catch
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I appreciate the review, but this poem actually is based on my personal events that I've experienced.. read moreI appreciate the review, but this poem actually is based on my personal events that I've experienced through life. I do like how you described the poem inn your perspective!
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