Torn

Sittin' here all alone.

This doesn't feel like a home.

Our family is torn apart,

And along with that so is my heart.

I dont have no one to run to,

Nowhere to go when i don't know what to do.

Please tell me that i will get through the rain,

That someday I won't have all this pain.

I'm pretty sure the day that the pain goes away,

Will be the day i'll be in my true home to stay.

 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

It's amazing to express emotions in such a strong way and still be able to keep up with the rhymes. The wishfulness is very tragic but the slight hint of hope looks promising. You create such expressive poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^