i miss you tonight

i miss you tonight,

your touch and feel,

your brown back

moving into mine

                         with ease

  and familiarity,

gliding across the cool divide

of cotton sheets

                        and fat pillows.

ah the smooth soft warm feel

of your luscious skin

                    on mine.

i am transported,

quietly softly groaning

                      shaking my skin,

until i turn

and settle into your body

  so completely

                       we are one.

Reviews

[Mariam]

would be a nice song...funky blues with a mellow voice :)

[brigid]

thanks so much mariam...i was only just thinking this week that i would love to write songs....would be glorious to hear your interpretation in song... :)

[Mariam]

you know, I think that this man could thing it http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=byIrfuspOfM you should write songs, your imagery is unique.

[brigid]

thanks so much mariam..i really appreciate your support....i will check it out..:)

[Mariam]

My pleasure)hope you will like it

[brigid]

he is fab....will follow up idea....who knows????

[Mariam]

found this treasure tonight) sounds sweet just like your poems

[brigid]

blessings. enjoy

[Michael G.]

Sensual, quiet, strong. Well written. I like the form also. It helps give depth to the phrases and words. Well done.

[Revery]

Just incredible. I love your style. You have that beautiful talent of writing about the sensual in the most dignified way. 100

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Beautiful Poem , very tender and loving