possibility thinking

the possibility

of

thinking about 

he and i

is endless.

he

with his 

purple tie dyed socks,

me

with my

black peasant top.

he

in his

kitted out caravan,

me

in my

artists attic retreat.

he

on his

shamanic drumming journey,

me

with my

forensic healing studies.

he

in his 

lawnmowed labyrinth,

me

in my

soft lambent lake.

he

with his

doggie faithful friend,

me

with myself, 

my all, my me.

Reviews

[Revery]

I was often surprised that your poetry didn't get more attention and kudos here, I always thought it stood far out front from most of what is here. I love this write, I love the complexities of the metaphors as well as your commitment to rhyme and meter. Thank you for sharing.

[brigid]

wow revery...your comments made me cry...thank you soooo much my poet friend. i have been away from here for a while now and early this morning made a committment with myself to be more active...and then i found your wonderful comments...so thank YOU...for inspiring me. deep appreciation to you x

[Revery]

Your welcome :)

[Jeffrey Gershom]

I enjoyed reading this. I hope that your "Possibility Thinking" becomes reality.

[brigid]

hi jeffrey,
thanks for your comments and support. this was about a fellow shaman i met while in uk and did some journey work with...purely business :)

[Jeffrey Gershom]

Sorry, I didn't mean to suggest any impropriety. I hope you were able to learn much that will help you in your journey! Blessed Be

[brigid]

no impropriety taken at all!!!!!! i did 2 journeys with him, drumming while sitting in his labrynth under a beautiful oak tree on the edges of bodmin and dartmoor. amazing times. blessings

[Jeffrey Gershom]

I'm a second generation Scottish/American. My roots which can be traced back to my great-great grandfather to my grandfather are from Perthshire, Scotland...how I wish to go there. Maybe someday.

[brigid]

i hope you get to visit such a strong ancestral place as you obviously feel a powerful connection. scotland is such an amazing place..very wild and woolly in parts....i am english but have loved my brief visit to scotland and also yearn to go back there.....would love to try living there...in a remote place..and write poetry and just be.....

[Jeffrey Gershom]

One of my biggest dreams is to be a published novelist and go on a book tour of the UK, especially, London. Then spend lots of time in Scotland. People think I'm weird here in the US because I like cool, misty days. To have a cottage near a small village and spend my time writing and going for walks...that's my idea of paradise.

[brigid]

sounds divine to me too!!!! i love the cool misty days onthe blackall range on the sunshine coast hinterland where i lived for a while...now i am down on the hot and muggy coast!!! why i keep asking ????
i do hope you fulfil your biggest dream to be a published novelist.

[Jeffrey Gershom]

As we begin our Spring in the Northern Hemisphere, I hope you're getting some temperature relief with the coming Fall. I have a facebook friend that lives in Melbourne, and we go back and forth about the weather.

I'm going to work hard to have my dream come true, and I hope yours is just around the corner.

[brigid]

yes its slightly cooler, yet today i was at a local beach in the shallows discussing the world with a good friend, enjoying the sun and freedom, watching the dogs and children play.melbourne is much cooler than sunny queensland...
i dont have a dream.....maybe odd but???? am a present moment person but i would love to share my life with a special person again......so fingers crossed!!

[Just Kim]

kind of a fun read, I enjoyed reading this.

[brigid]

thanks. glad you enjoyed tabbycat..love your picture..

[Michael G.]

Nice poem. It has a certain sing-song quality to it. I like the simplicity of it. Good work!

[brigid]

hi michael. appreciate your comments. cheers

[Michael G.]

You're very welcome.

[brigid]

:)

[Inda]

My this is a fun read and I swear I can see both you and him and it plays in my head like the start of movie. Good job!

[brigid]

wow thanks inda....very nice review...stoked it was so clear for you.