Just A Kiss

Breaking the chains of the past
Forging the paths of the future
Unlocking the gateway of passion
Testing the waters of love
Two lips touch, taste, tease
Releasing waves to break upon the shore
Bracing for the next deluge
Thunderous emotions intensify
Aching need spirals within, tightly coiled
Two tongues delve, dance, delight
Extinction of thought, replete with wonder
Heartbeats quicken, unite in time
Existing solely within this moment
Immeasurable what is offered and received
With just a kiss

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

In that first kiss, all the connections made, fall away, are reformed, no spark felt from the touch of fingertips can match, that shock, the sheer jolt, felt in that first kiss. In that first kiss, all that might ever be is laid out before us, time stops, as time quickens, the future and all it holds, enfolds us, in that moment, that lasts forever, yet never seems to last long enough... but that first kiss, leads to the second kiss, and in that second kiss, footsteps upon tomorrow, powered by that amazing energy found in the first kiss, are set in motion...

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

wow this was amazing.... it describes ecatly how i felt when my last bf first kissed me... granted he just dumped me but it was a great poem ^.^

[Wildecat]

This is another beautiful poem, nothing beats a kiss. Great write.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

beautifully done very nice poem--it's serving its purpose and all it is is a kiss, thanks for sharing this Cheers:)

[charleybear]

Reading this i had lovely visuals. A kiss so filled with love, passion and warmth. The feelings you experience when you have a perfect kiss. I liked it very much. Thank you for sharing it.

[Antony]

that is all it takes is just one sweet kiss and the rest will follow without hesitation. I love thinking about them first kisses, some bring back good memories and warm feelings and others bring back nightmares. lol
It makes us wonder what the next first kiss will feel like........what it will bring to us.

Tony

[poetic soul]

lovely poem! :) liked it

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Gandré]

fantastic pic of a perfect kiss. this was a symphony. loved it!!

[~Mary Ann~]

This is based on the comment I just sent you... read your own piece!!! This is warm and toasty!! :)
Nice... ;p

[Ahmad Alhour]

Awesome...
True... Meaningful... Deep...
I like it...

Good work,
Keep it up...