Protect Me

Hold me
Hold me and make it all better
Embrace me
Embrace me and never let go
Touch me
Touch me and send sparks through me
Hold me
Hold me and rock me back and forth
Put your arms around me
Put your arms around me and let me curl up inside them
Sit with me
Sit with me until i fall asleep
Sleep with me
Sleep next to me and let me hold you tight
Stay with me
Stay with me until the break of day
Keep me next to you
Keep me next to you until the end of the world

Reviews

[Brandee D. Hack]

Very nice. When you write your poetry, however, don't be afraid to be descriptive. Be colourful with words. :) You have some great talent. I quite enjoyed this piece. Keep it up!

[ann marie]

AMAZING, AS ALWAYS.

[catherine]

This is the best thing I have read all week. It sent chills up my spine and gave me goosebumps. Great job, keep it up!!

[CircusNerd]

i like the emotional 'don't leave me alone' behind the words, my only concern was with this line

Sleep with me
Sleep next to me and let me hold you tight

because every other pair of lines stated the first within the second
overall, good job :-)

[A]

Love this! It's so cute! I really like the positive vibe and how it's not depressing. Great poem! :)