You are

be ture

You are not the most beautiful
you just have that smile
that stuns me for a while

You are not the most captivating
you just have those eyes
that hides no lies

You are not the bravest
you just have the heart
never gives up even how hard

You are not the wisest
you just have that untiring drive
to learn more than books can give

Yes, you are not the best
there's just this someone
who loves you above the rest

I have loved you
for just being true
I'll be loving you
for simply being you.

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (you just have that eyes) those eyes -- the word "that" does not fit the context of the sentence
(to learn more that books can give) more then -- the word "that" does not fit the context of the sentence

Review: First I want to applaud you for your bravery as I see you are from the Philippines and I assume English if not your native language. Writing in a second language is not an easy task and to do it in English which is one of if not the hardest one what with all the rules and so many words having multiple meanings. To that I have a link that can help you with that, Grammarly can help with grammar, spelling, and punctuation https://app.grammarly.com I hope you find it as useful as I do. Now back to your poem, it is an interesting concept the push away with a your not to comment then the pull close and envelope with complementary words of affection. And your ending stanza delivers a powerful statement that should melt the hearts of your female readers and have your male readers taking notes. Bravo! I give if five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Brigg Aries]

thank you so much dear friend ^^

[Dave]

Brigg - I am not much of a grammarian. I write, myself, to convey the feelings I have and wish to express. If others like them, fine, if not, well too bad. Me, I liked this piece you wrote. You put your heart out there for all to see. Good for you.

Take care - Dave

[Brigg Aries]

thanks Dave.