Vision of Angels

Light flashes, then vanishes away,

Like the truth liers say,

When dark clouds cover the flower of May,

Only reason can show you the way.

 

Justice continues his goodbye,

As the women weep and sigh,

While the man is raised on high,

A sinner in the sky.

 

Now will come the day,

When iniquity will have its say,

In this game of life and death we play,

Only few will find the way.

Reviews

[ravenjess]

very cool. I really liked the last stanza. awesome image.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I love this, Bridget! The rhymes are great. The choice of wording is spot-on; it all sounds beautiful together. Splendid job.

[karen samarin]

i love your writing straight and to the point...... great job thank you for sharing with me

[Linzey]

I like the imagery and the line "like the truth liers say". It's an amazing piece of writing.

[Thea]

You crafted some nice imagery here...The flow is well managed...
A fine piece of writing.
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

Good thoughts and visions create by this poem. I like the desire and the purpose of this story. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote