Angel Nitz

Angel Nitz

A Poem by Bri 810
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RIP 9-19-13

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Skid marks.
Tires.
Off the road.

Water splashing.
Screaming.
Unheard.

Spinning.
Spinning.
Out of control.

Dying.
Dead.
Then weeping.
Heaven took another soul.

© 2013 Bri 810


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Such a tragic poem that we are seeing all too often. Your poem is succinct, brief and that makes it all the more powerful in its message.
Excellent! Especially your last line!

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow... that was really touching.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Bri 810

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I'm a 20-something year old (I say this not because I'm ashamed of my age but because I know I'll never update this and I've got awhile before it'd need to be 30-something) from Michigan. I enjoy read.. more..

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A Poem by Bri 810