For You

i break down my words
again and again
until they are so small
they don't make sense anymore...
5 letters, 4 letters, 3 letters, 2
apparently the numbers don't add up for me and you.

bones sinking like stones, one of us is hurt
guess who?
moans from the dreams and the schemes
from past lives in the night
while i am awake
suffering
from intake, as i lie next to you
it must be true
just because i am losing
doesn't mean i've lost

You're a badfish?
Here's the hook.............

Reviews

[Dai Edenburough]

Kinda reminds me of a song (nearly everything does) called "Ain't Love A B***h" by Rod Stewart, you should listen to it!

[Linear]

I aint swallowing that.............good flow, love sucks sometimes, but it's sure good for poets :O) well done

[Emily B]

you've got the stuff, apparently :)

[cfix]

I love your closing lines, amazing!!

[Deck_As_Heck]

I LOVE THIS