Often, I Dream Of You

Often, I dream of you,

as I fall fast asleep.

And you are there, too,

as we count sheep, together,

lying there, hand in hand,

as we will be,

always and forever.

Often, you’ve dreamt of me,

as you have always said.

Whilst we set sail into

the deepest of blue seas,

wherein lie our pleasantries,

and our greatest dreams.

Although we lie far away,

within our dreams,

there are no such boundaries,

that I won’t cross to find you,

and to tell you,

that I am madly in love

with everything about you.

Often, I dream of us,

as I trust you do as well,

crossing mountains and streams,

to find you outside my dreams,

and in my arms at last,

as we look to the dreadful past,

now all but a distant memory,

for my love, I shall carry you,

and together, we shall eternally sleep.

Forever. And ever. And ever...

Reviews

[costa siwale]

well pieced and dreamy.Well written Mr Brian

[Ana B.]

A beautiful, touching journey in the land where we have our mind as the painter, where we walk with our palette, i enjoyed this very much :)

[Ella]

Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. The sleeping forever means, to me, death. Where they both lie down and dream of each other forever. I think you did a lovely job. Really enjoyed this!!

[Sela]

Awesome writing as usual! This one was particularly on the spot ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and powerful words my friend.
"Often, I dream of us,
as I trust you do as well,
crossing mountains and streams,
to find you outside my dreams,
and in my arms at last,"
Wishes and dreams. This is our wealth in old age. Thank you Brain for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

Want a cute poem!
I loved it!!
Keep it up!

[.]

The linking of minds and souls while dreaming... very nice.

I'm noticing a very romantic side to your writing now, Brian. Flowers, lovers, longing and love. It is a very powerful phase to be in.

Keep up the good work.

[dan]

This seems to be a story of two lovers separated by great geographical distance...but as they dream of each other simultaneously it's almost as if you are texting each other, each inviting the other to share the dream until the distance can be bridged. A really top-notch write, Brian; my compliments! take care...dan

[DoormanDan]

Often, we do sleep well when we know somebody special is thinking and caring about us. Beautiful piece, my fellow writer. :)