Feeling Alone

Feeling Alone

A Poem by Brian M. Peeples

She’d shown us the way,

and all we had done

was laugh in her face,

mocking the strangeness

of this magnificent place,

that she’d once called home.


And now, I feel alone.

© 2015 Brian M. Peeples


Author's Note

Brian M. Peeples
In the briefest of words, I attempted to paint a scene of conflict between Mother Earth and Humankind.

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Nice place of words, amazing write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


The conflict left in this piece was great but I feel like its missing something....

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it!
Very nice wording!

Posted 8 Years Ago


If only...
I just love the way you wrote this short piece.
It effectively and creatively conveys your message.
a bit heartbreaking too!
thanks for sharing Brian.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Brian, To take on such a massive concept was very ambitious. To convey your message in a write as brief as you did takes much thought and an abundance of talent. VERY well conceptualized and superbly written. If you don't mine I'm saving this in my library favorites. Great piece of writing!! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


(I attempted to paint a scene of conflict between Mother Earth and Humankind.) And you did so with vivid imagery Brian. I look forward to reading more of your work. And by the way....we share the same last name and just may be related! ~Sharon Peeples

Posted 8 Years Ago


Brian M. Peeples

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! And haha, that's actually pretty neat! Who knows, perhaps we are!
Honest and direct thoughts my friend. It is sad what we do to Mother Nature.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the brevity; and the ambiguity. “She” could also be freedom: Lady Liberty. Once we welcomed the people of the world to our country. Now we want to build walls to keep them out. Good job. You are very talented.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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It's nice, but for me it will be 'awesome' if you make it longer. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


well,with the explanation,you have said a lot with few words

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Brian M. Peeples
Brian M. Peeples

Norwich, CT



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I am a twenty-three year old writer & poet. My passion for writing comes from all over. I love to write, and I love to inspire others. Hopefully when I'm gone one day, I'll leave behind all my writin.. more..

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