Still In Love With You

There is a story,

that I can never tell

No matter how much I want to

No matter how loud I yell

This endless pain,

it won’t ever go away,

as I wait here for clear skies

but all I see is rain…

I have not a home

to yet call my own,

nor a lovely girl

to give her the world

I am lost; confused,

as I light this troubled fuse

It is attached to my heart,

tied to this bloodied dart

Shot through,

because of you

broken in half,

a timely aftermath

As I fall from this cloud,

the dream of my reality,

my death; swift and without a sound

even as I plummet to the ground

And it is there,

that I’ve found my place,

and even if I disappear

without a trace,

I’ll still be here

for you,

no matter what

you do,

because,

I am still in love

with you…

Reviews

[Shae]

Thanks for sharing, simply beautiful :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime love is hard to forget.
"because,
I am still in love
with you…"
Love is the best and hardest day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[dan]

I like the way that you use the earlier stanzas to set the table, to culminate in the heartfelt message, "I am still in love with you." Very nicely done, Brian. take care...dan

[wordman]

so ,you better tell her my friend

[Emily]

Vary nice poem!
Well done!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

So, you're in love with someone, but you didn't tell her yet, or she does not love you...or atleast, thats what she says. I may be wrong, but these two possible meanings hit my head when reading this poem. Very well done. :)