Always

Perhaps if I cry in the rain, 

I'll feel the earth's pain 

And as I wipe her tears away, 

maybe she will say... 

"I will love you... 

Always..."

Reviews

[RiverRei]

Short but to the point. I want to say that I enjoyed reading this but it seems inconsiderate since it's a sad and heartbreaking piece. It makes me want to cry because I've been there before. If you've been there then I'm sorry that you have and I'm here for you if you need anything. Thank you very much for sharing this with me!

[closed]

i like how you composed this poem
you use the concept of rain and sorrow well i think

it expresses the longing we often have to fix something involving someone we care about

thanks for sharing it


-Dream

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Rain and life. Been a good combination for a long time. I like how you used tears and rain in the poem. A very nice ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[dan]

Brian, Sometimes the shortest pieces carry the heaviest wallop. The beauty and simplicity of this write bowl me over, VERY well written! take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thing is...people can take multiple meanings from poems...i'm always confused when i want to find the meaning behind poems.

[micky]

Wow this is beautiful...amazing,left me breathless

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Umm...not sure about the meaning...