All I Need

I feel,

feel for you,

as you

feel for me,

though,

they may not

always agree,

I don’t care

about them...

only you,

and you alone

So please,

come back,

back home…

because,

you are

all I need...

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

Lovely, truly beautiful

they may not
always agree,
I don’t care
about them...
only you,

it seems that some people just don't agree with the love of two...but love shall always prevail... for love is patient and kind... This is beautifully done Brian...well done :D

[Moonlight]

This poem is really beautiful. I guess by not using any full stops, you meant to convey the continuous trail of thought of the poet...? Great job! :)

[Cambion]

Because of its sincerity and vital pacing, I imagined that each line was the translation of a heartbeat. Another fine work by a fine artist.

[Matching Socks]

Simple, efficient and effective use of words.

[Cool Girl]

Another love poem? I like it! Nice job here:)