A Ghostly Kiss

Whisper me your name,

and I will breathe you into existence.

Caress my dying heart,

and I will take your place…

Show me a sign of hope,

and I will tell you all I know.

As you breathe life into my soul,

I shall make your presence known.

For you, my love, my undying ghost,

we shall wander together, forever.

To boundaries that are yet unknown;

to cherish the unbreakable bond

between two star-crossed lovers.
Always hovering towards each other,

from the eternal depths of forever.

Drifting in the never-ending wind,

like a lonely, lonely feather.

Wondering how to find true bliss,

from the chance of a ghostly kiss.

Reviews

[bee]

Aaaaww..... its like two bodies and one soul. Such a depth of a "kiss".

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

I'm not usually one for romance but this was great :) The last two lines were especially wonderful. Nice job!

[NeiL ArandA]

A whole new approach to express and expound on this mysterious kiss .

[Lizardo]

This is wonderful Brian, very nice poem.

[Matching Socks]

This is gorgeous Brian, longing for that kiss that is there but just out of reach.

[Afraa]

Mysterious, haunting, and beautiful. Just my kind of poetry. You did an exquisite job on this one.

Well done!

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks! I seem to be writing a lot more since coming to this site. I guess I have writercafe to thank for that haha!

[Layi Tate]

Absolutely Beautiful Brian !!!

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks! I'll definitely be writing more poems like this! :)

[Layi Tate]

Your welcome sweetie ....