The Sun And The Moon

Just a little excerpt I decided to share with everyone.

There are times where destiny, fate, and chance co-exist within one’s life, providing a gift of miracles that make their way into the hearts of others. These miracles may seem like mere coincidences, but that is far from the truth. In fact, miracles happen to those destined to do great things, especially in the future, a future that has yet to be molded into existence. It is something we all share, what we all endure. Every single emotion in the entire world, every feeling, is shared by the billions of people that live on this beautiful planet, experiencing the same thoughts, same goals, all with loving and caring hearts. We all share a heart, a human heart, and whether or not we do the right thing, or the wrong thing, it is our humanity that brings us closer as one species...as one soul, one spirit. And, in all honesty, when that happens...the Sun and the Moon may once more find themselves able to share their forbidden love on the same spiritual plane, together, and for the rest of eternity.

Author's Note

Sort of wrote this for a novel I'm working on, but I found that it may cool to just post this and see what people think. Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Layi Tate]

I would love to see more ....

[Matching Socks]

Forbidden and unattainable love finally finding that middle ground where they can co-exist.
Very cool.

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks. I appreciate the review. It's based on a romance novel I'm planning on writing very soon.

[Matching Socks]

Cool. Good luck with it!

[Lizardo]

Really nice, you should work on it. I'll read it and i like how you said that we are all one.
We suffer, feel emotions, fight back. really nice part of the novel.

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks. Honestly, I'm not sure if I'm going to include that into the novel, because it's a little different than where I want to go with my story. I was mainly just trying to spark my idea, trying to find out how I should write the story. I wrote out how I truly feel, my real emotions.

[Lizardo]

Wonderful and excelent.
It's kind of what i do, i write how i feel and what i think.

[Brian M. Peeples]

Exactly. That's the best way to write, in all honesty. The more emotions felt from writer to reader, the more connection there is, and the more the reader wants to feel what the writer feels. A connection.

[Lizardo]

Its like saying: ''I feel or felt like this at a certain time of my life, i want you to read what i felt in those experiences''

[Brian M. Peeples]

Yes. Very true and very wise words.

[Cool Girl]

I enjoyed it! I'm also really excited that I'm first to reveiw on this! Great job:)