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Beautiful, this strange place is

With such colorful memories; a true bliss

As if kissed by an archaic wish upon a star

A fluorescent light, glowing in ancient space

Forever looked upon by wandering eyes

That which lie beneath the crescent moon

On this celestial rock we call our home

Whilst life here shall always and forever bloom

Until forever becomes nothing more, nothing less

Just another distant memory; a theory at best

But as each precious moment is sewn in time

Embraced by the many; appreciated by few

Though, altogether broken by the many humans, too

You should know that I have nowhere else to go

Because deep down, the earth shall always, always...

This celestial planet, my world, shall always be my home

Reviews

[Skai Rain]

"Kissed by an archaic wish upon a star."
Love it. Great work.

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks! I actually loved that line, myself. It has much meaning to it.

[Afraa]

Has anyone tried whispering this, or reading it aloud? Once again, the speechlessness got the best of me. You never cease to impress me, Brian. Please do continue writing more of these. There is something about your poetry and stories that stand out from the rest.

Magnificent job as always, my friend.

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks! I'm always appreciative of the comments you make!

[Emily]

'Forever looked upon by wandering eyes'
My favorite line!
Well done!

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks! I appreciate the comment!

[Cool Girl]

I read this poem yestrday, but forgot to reveiw:P
It is truly wonderful. It is almost like a reflection:)
I love it!

[Matching Socks]

This is open for interpretation I think but to me it sounds like a declaration that, even when the body passes, the heart and spirit will remain here with loved ones and special place. Home is where the heart is...