No Reality

Eye, Sea, (the letter) U

Lost, deep, and confused

Troubled mind, I utterly find

Within this poem, a solitude

For you, myself, and a friend

Not an end to the madness

Never an end to the sadness

But unless we, unless we breathe

Above the sky, and below the sea

Deep caverns where many lives bleed

Into the tunnels of apparent nonsense

Trying to make up for subtle amends

But to our expense, when all else fails

As to no avail, it seems, within one reality

But two, or three, or countless more

There is no need for so many to be

My reality, where have you been?

No reality, there is never such an end

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Good imagery.

NOTES: I recommend you break this one into rhyming couplets.

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks for the advice! You've been rather spot on with both this poem and the other one that you reviewed. Your comments are much appreciated.

[MomzillaNC]

YVW. I try to be helpful. We're all here to grow and learn as writers.