A Lover's Poem

Sentence cannot comprehend my love, my emotion,

My thought towards what is sincere to my heart

As nothing has grasped my attention so directly before

That your elegant smile pierces my mind ten times over

And settling your gaze upon mine, as if nothing else mattered

Aspiring one day that we may see ourselves, hand in hand,

Listening to the songbirds while I write to you a simple poem

One of love, and of admiration for your sweet, sweet soul

A poem to grasp your senses and arouse your deepest thoughts

Forever it will say how much I adore your beautiful eyes

Like diamonds they shine; as precious as two silver jewels

Defining your beauty even further to its gracious extent

For you are as delicate as a feather in the wandering winds

As your voice sounds a melody of that which I have fallen for

As kind and sensible as your grace has ever been so

Will you follow me no matter where our two hearts shall go?

Reviews

[Isabella Disney]

Such a sweet tribute to Love :)

[Brian M. Peeples]

This is actually the first poem I have on record that I hadn't thrown away; from 2011 or so.

[Emily]

I love the way you ended it with a question!
Keep it up!!

[dan]

Brian, Now this is just flat out lovely. So much feeling and love expressed, one gets the feeling while reading it that you could have gone on and on with it. I hope this was actually TO someone and I hope they LOVED it. take care...dan

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem my friend. I do like the poetry that ends with a question.
"Will you follow me no matter where our two hearts shall go?"
The questions of love are answered with time together and holding on tightly. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

i just cant find the words,so i wrote you a poem to say i love you,i`m sure she loved it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Someone's in love...obviously Lol. Now to get serious... Awesome write, no other words... Just awesome :)

[Cool Girl]

Yay! Am I first to comment on this?!?!? I think I'm first to comment on this!!! I am overwhelmed with joy!! Anyways this is BEAUTIFUL!! I like it....a lot. This reveiw isn't formal because, well, I just ate a lot of candy. But....the main idea here is that I like this poem. So great job!

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks, and haha that's actually really funny.

[Cool Girl]

Haha, you're welcome:)