Angel

A Poem by Shapeshifter

Sweet angel, dried tears

Blood on your sugar tounge tonight

Arrows in your skin

© 2008 Shapeshifter

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Frances O'Neill

There are eight syllables in the second line, along with the fact that I really don't know what it

means. Is it to do with Halloween? Sorry!

Posted 16 Years Ago

FoolsGold23

nicely crafted haiku, the syllables read a 5-8-5 line though. (could be a mode that I don't know, and if so, excuse my rambling) That's the only thing I'd pick out, but the ideas evoked in this one are both bitter yet mysterious, Love in a word, haha, brilliant.

Posted 16 Years Ago

lauren emily

Short, and like the writer below me said, very powerful. It's also filled with different emotions, which I think is just great.
Good job,
~Lauren

Posted 16 Years Ago

Angelic Darkness

Short, yet powerful and very vivid. AD

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on August 18, 2008
Last Updated on August 18, 2008

Author

Shapeshifter

Raleighwood, NC

About

I consider myself and old soul knowing things I can't yet explain. I take it slow and stare past the surface where all things are eventually revealed. I plan to use this new energy for good, (maybe).... more..