Music in the Rain II

This is a poem i wrote as a reply to a fellow writer's request to write a sequal to the original poem i wrote about the rain (it's a little obviouse when they both have the same title). i hope you all like it. also, my inspiration durived from my love for

Every time I hold out my hand

Every time I feel the strange yet beautiful touch

The very touch of love

The very touch of soft rain upon my bare skin

 

Every time I open my ears to the winds

Every time I listen to the tapping waters of the sky’s tears

The very sound of love

The very sound of rain upon the soft earth

 

Every time I smell that sweetness in the air

Every time the scent of the rain tickles my nose

The very indescribable smell of love

The very smell I wait for when I know its coming

 

I know it’s there in front of me

I know the rain loves me as well as the entire world ‘round

Singing to my very soul

Music that flows right down into my third eye

 

Music

Music I love

Listen the music

The music in the rain.

Reviews

[Rainbowco]

Lovely soft fall your words like rain to the page. Very well done.

[imm's place]

This is very elegant in its style and lows beautifully. the words paint a lovely image

[Pakino]

Nice poetic style to the poem sounds real good. The structure is good and the message is great. Nice!

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You have extraordinary sensitivity....it is a significant gift. This is full and lovely.

[Sam Freeland]

rain, music and love woven together in a beautifully inspirational poem...these elements
make dreaming and poetry forces that stir our soul.
as you said you started writing at an early age...very important for any writer, my friend

[Rosary]

I like the use of elemtans the sense of smell sense of touch and the pure emotion in this poem

[Mr. Lopez]

I like the connection between rain and love. To be showered with love is like music to the soul. Great poem my friend.

[mysticgmekeepr]

thats quite good, especially for someone only 17. Keep writing, you'll be amazed at what comes through you.

[Babbette Francis]

Music that flows right down into my third eye--- lol-- oookay! lol

I loved it, not sure why you needed to mention the third eye, but as for as the rest of it- I thought it was beautiful. I too love music and dancing in the rain. So this reached me deep.