My Own Personal Goddess

this poem was inspired by a fellow writer from writers cafe. and initially its about the one i love so much. the one i hold dear in my heart. i hope you all like it.

She’s like a goddess,

Face so soft,

Soft as silk,

Feet so quite,

Quiet like soft waves on an ocean shore

As she walks the path of moon light

Gleaming with beauty no mortal has ever dreamed of seeing

 

Love women

For they are this goddess

Every woman has this single goddess inside

Some just choose not to show it

As if they're hiding their true beauty

Like all goddesses should do

Love women

 

Now, as this single goddess in my lover's eyelid comes walking

Walking down from the beautiful moon itself

She gives me a kiss

And, now,

She is with me forever

The goddess I hold in my arms

Will be in my arms the rest of my life and on.

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

This is amazing. Luna teachings somewhat (this and respect the balance of things). All women are Goddesses, and you are expressing it in a way to love someone. I wish I could express this way to someone I love, but I shun her instead. I believe in what you are saying, but it's hard to apply.

[Michael X]

I can't see how this wouldnt capture any woman's heart.. indeed you bring out the goddess nature-
painted upon the palate of inspiration.."my own personal goddess" reflects the goddess appreciation
in every mans heart.. for to capture the beauty of a woman at full height would be to describe
her goddess nature.. for we as beings of this earth hold such quality-to be able to express love

as admirationally ascending -in perception of holding a woman close to the heart--she takes on
a goddess nature--for people are really gods in their own right--Gods on earth--but to see such is
only captured through a poet's pen is how this poem makes me feel.. thank you

[Shane]

I know how you feel..excellent poem..just out of interest,who inspired you?

[MrJodie]

Ah, the immortal soul within these beautifully fragile, delicate containers that grace our lives with divine light. You've captured that perfectly, here. I love the way you weave between devotion for your goddess and the Goddess in all women. It's more than a sentiment, it's praise and rightly so.

Every morning offer a thankful prayer. Never take it for granted that you have this blessing in your life.

And, for heaven's sake, keep writing about it because it's FANTASTIC to read. Thank you for sharing this.

[mysticgmekeepr]

You are right, every woman has a goddess within...we are vessels for the gods.

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You are so magnificently talented with sensual feeing for one so young. I simply love your zest for life and your love for women.

[Que]

You probably made me like this one because you linked women and the moon. The moon happens to be my love.

Personaly favorite line, "Now, as this single goddess in my lover's eyelid comes walking." Beautifully done.

~Que

[Angel's Lady]

This beautiful write from a man who calls himself the Lizard King? Tom Robbins-ish? What a sensual and lovely piece of writing...great job!

[Rosary]

well ive never thought of myself as a goodess but i like your respect to women and you can tell in your writings your love towards this women is real and thats a very powerful thing i wish you luck in the journeys ahead in all that is love there is alot of bumps in the road of love so be careful

Very beautiful. I loved the thought and sincerity you placed in this piece. It was well written. Very good!