Sweet Songs of Nature

I love nature and everything around it

Life, the beauty of each wiggling leaf in the whispering wind

Each and every bird's everlasting song

And with each opening of my eyes

I see more and more of what it is I love about nature

Love is the thing that brings it together

Like a pulse

A melody

A harmony

A pulse of a heart beat, fast in love

Nature is in my eyes as it is within my soul

As it is around us all

Treasure the beauty of each breeze

Treasure the loving breath of rain

And nature itself will keep on giving it to you

All you have to do is listen to it.

Reviews

[Cats Eye]

Kind of fits the Adam and Eve feeling if you ask me but hey what can I say thats what it sounds like to me, otherwise it's really great, but I tend to find the beauty in things more when I keep my eyes closed, it allows me to use my "Imagination"...lol....other then that I found it to be well contstructed and really interesting, it kinda seems like I'm rambling on now...so I'll just stop now, hopefully, P.S. I love you, baby.

[vanishing]

This is excellent writing
you put a tremendous ammount of thought
and personal insight into the vision
which paints an image of self awareness
and what it means to be at one
with the environment
Beautflly done! I'll have to add it to my fav's

[Babbette Francis]

I love being outdoors. The sight, sounds, smell of fresh clean air (I live in the country, yay!) I love the thoughts I have and yes I love the messages that are in the breezes.

Great poem. Loved it!

[Sam Freeland]

Sights, sounds and the beauty of our environment appreciated by you and well described.
Being able to share your experiences gives us a commonality that brings us together in
your poem. While many enjoy these natural beauties, their inability to share in words
of their own describes the world of which we know that is lacking in communication
skills....fortunately our examples are there to help them.

[radian7]

Love the nature theme and find the hour glass physical format very fitting. Nice word use techniques also such as alliteration, use of key repetition and such.

[Angel's Lady]

Very beautiful and quite befitting of spring time. Very excellent job!

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How right you are! A loving, beautiful testament to all that is around us.

This is a great piece about nature. I loved the line about the rain. Very good!

[Rosary]

I like this one its nice to be positive