Music in the rain

 

With each tapping, dripping sound of the rain

I feel a little more at home

The rain comes to me like a mother’s soothing hand

Wiping away all of my pains.

 

With each tapping, dripping sound of the rain

I feel growth within the frozen earth

The rain comes and heals the winter scorched lands

Washing away the sad, dark winter.

 

With each tapping, dripping sound of the rain

I finally feel at peace with the world

The rain comes down like an orchestra for the world

Ending each and every note with great love.

Reviews

[Que]

I mainly read this one because of the title, "Music In the Rain." Music and rain are two of my favorite things. Actually, music is my favorite thing...ever.

Anyways, I'll have to agree with your poem.

Alas, I've never been very good at reviewing poems, they're too full of sensations that I haven't the words for.

~Que

[Legion]

Never really looked at it this way. Does make a nice rhythm as it strikes the earth below. Good write.

[Oz in Exile]

This is just my interpretation of your words:

An Orchestra of Rain Fall

I feel more at home
With the tapping sound of rain;
A mother's soft hand

Frozen earth, now soft
With the tapping sound of rain;
Winter landscapes bloom

The world is at ease
With the tapping sound of rain;
Each note echoes love...

D.R. Edwards

It's a good poem Tasty. I can't help but feel there's more though - my translation feels incomplete. Perhaps that's just my limitations, but if you do find more - please write another poem. I'd look forward to reading that one too.