i have yet to paint it ...yet

i have yet to paint it ...yet

A Poem by The Tao of Bri
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sacrifice to the insomnia gods..

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i have yet to paint it ...yet

 

i have visited the moon 

from my serenity rock meditation

along the lulling waves lapping at the shores of my soul

 

i yearn for a new perspective

 

so i climbed my tree and hung out

on a sturdy branch

high above the water

and saw a new vision

that I have yet to paint...

 

 

 

© 2008 The Tao of Bri


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The Tao of Bri
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Sounds like a good metaphor for future dreams and hopes if not plans. Vivid picture you paint here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


My how the mind will race and paint these vivid pictures in our minds. This poem may be short and a by product of your insomnia but I thought that it was great ! many Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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