Restoration

Restoration

A Poem by The Tao of Bri
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To the celebration of Enough Part II; Restoration to the path of Peace and Light. When there is so much chaos bombarding you, it is a good idea to choose your battles. And if all there is are battles, it is a damn good idea to find another place to live

"

 

Restoration

 

in the white light

restores my faith in life

that I enjoy now

living

 

the white light

that blinds, my true sight

that I enjoy now

believing

 

I have

seen enough pain sear my eyes

heard enough lies pierce my ears

felt enough fear fool my spirit

bled enough soul to know...

 

that sometimes, only sometimes

when there are

too many words...

                       or not enough words...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it is time for

no more words...

                        I have all that I need...

and then all that is left

is to put down the period.

 

 

© 2008 The Tao of Bri


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A poem with soul...peaceful. Quiet has its virtues. Nice write with a great ending.

I have all that I need...
and then all that is left
is to put down the period.



Posted 16 Years Ago


yes when we had so much pain,lies and being fooled all the time ,there is no more words to be said ,for we have said enough ,this great ,i enjoyed it a lot

Posted 16 Years Ago


How are you?

Just wanted you to know that I enjoyed your words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This reminds me so much of a quote by Mozart wherein he said:

'To speak well and eloquently is a very great art but to know the right moment to stop is an even greater one.'

Thank you for such an intelligent and lovely write.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


intreging piece. Well written.
Sandra

Posted 16 Years Ago


Brilliant, to say the least
Very thought provoking and amazingly inspiring.
This stirs up so many emotions that I don't even know where to start. so let's rather say that I am a loss for words
Specially when it comes to this part

when there are
too many words...
or not enough words...
it is time for
no more words...

So true and so beautiful!
I salute you on a piece amazingly written!



Posted 16 Years Ago


Bravo my friend!
seen enough pain sear my eyes
heard enough lies pierce my ears
I like these lines. The whole piece is clever and kept me intersted . You contonue to impress me . Great job .

Posted 16 Years Ago


loved this poem, really speaks to the heart of the writer with passionate force from the soul, with a
meaningful, enlightening messege, the metaphorical aspect is spot on, and draws the reader to a
state of knowing when to punctuate, as in restoration, being able to see with the clarity of positive light,
the artwork is a spirited presentation, a true representation of art in full spectrum, excellent work!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 22, 2008
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The Tao of Bri
The Tao of Bri

Augusta, ME, Italy



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