The Truth

The Truth

A Poem by The Tao of Bri
"

My journey to acceptance

"

The Truth


"One step closer to my acceptance"

I wish I could live in that fantasy…

            The one where you loved me…

 

We are both realists though….

 

 

You

really

I really Love You A lot.

Some

One

Else

And

Not

Me.

So I cannot be a safe stand in or pretend that I could have my most fervent wish…

God help me, I wish I could, as even that world is better...

 

 

 

 To God

and 

your Son souly...

can I be

a

second...

…If only my soul did not crack so

     Leaving that perfect world of make believe…

If only there were a sliver of a chance…

But we both know that our shards must be meant to only

Reflect each other’s light for a path

We walk together~

Alone…..

The BEst of Friends…

 

© 2008 The Tao of Bri


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A somber feel to this write, seems to express a depth of longing that is very touching and very Truthful. It is difficult to be One with someone else - most always feel alone at the same time...great expression here. I very much like the layout of the piece as well. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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"We walk together...alone" *sigh* and isn't that just the reality of it, sometimes? I love how you not only used the words, but the arrangement of the words to convey your feelings. Very impressive.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A somber feel to this write, seems to express a depth of longing that is very touching and very Truthful. It is difficult to be One with someone else - most always feel alone at the same time...great expression here. I very much like the layout of the piece as well. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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