I AM ME AND THAT'S ALL I CAN BE

I AM ME AND THAT'S ALL I CAN BE

A Poem by Ms.Bri

I am the clothes on my back

I am the thoughts in my head

I am the feelings in my heart

I am the writing on my paper

I am the words that comes out my mouth

I am the piece that holds my family together

I am the blood that runs through my veins

I am the problem in my situation

I am the solution to my problem

I am the soul within my body

I am the wind beneath my wings

I am the strengths and the weaknesses

I am the fear and the courage within me

I am the shadows on the wall

I AM ME AND THAT'S ALL I CAN BE

© 2012 Ms.Bri


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Yes. Every piece of us represents us as a whole. And I love the last line. You are you and you shouldn't try to be someone else. This poem shows great wisdom. I think you did a pretty good job. Just one thing though... "I am the wind beneath my wings" - how is that possible? :)) It came to me as if you were saying that you're everything. Haha. But that's just what I think. Well, anyway, keep on writing. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You make me think:

I am not any of the above
Being outside all being
Above, beyond, behind, below
Such is my notness

You make me think and that is good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it. Great jobb

Posted 12 Years Ago


i really like how you illuminate the poles within yourself--the problem, yet, the solution...the fear, yet, the courage. it reminds us that we are complete in ourselves.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'd say yer packed and loaded for bear.

recognitions and affirmations. Keeping it real.

now, write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem that everyone can relate to. My favorite lines would have to be "I am the wind beneath my wings" and "I am the shadows on the wall". Great job. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW. This was just...great. My favorite lines were these; "I am the wind beneath my wings" and "I am the soul within my body". You are very talented, and I look forward to reviewing more of your work!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes. Every piece of us represents us as a whole. And I love the last line. You are you and you shouldn't try to be someone else. This poem shows great wisdom. I think you did a pretty good job. Just one thing though... "I am the wind beneath my wings" - how is that possible? :)) It came to me as if you were saying that you're everything. Haha. But that's just what I think. Well, anyway, keep on writing. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ms.Bri
Ms.Bri

Newark, NJ



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i am briana i live in new jersey ..i am here to share my poetic words with others .. i am me and that's all i can be ..I love expressing the way i feel through words. more..

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