Winter Traditions

The winter sky is a moving lullaby so lovely and mysterious.

Each year rambunctious juveniles rush into a mountain of sparkling snow flakes. 

Holiday movies, themed parties, and more the winter season has multiple experiences to endure. 

Family comes close to deliver their love, and friends return to your side demanding you to rebel!

Remember to savor all of this delightful madness when the cold reality returns. 

The sky will brighten, and Spring will return. 

Author's Note

Hola!! this is my seasonal poem on Winter :)

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

I live in florida. It's winter for about 20 minutes.

[KarinaT]

I can smell the fresh snow - really lovely Briana

[Brianaswriting]

thank you :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Very enjoyable poem! :)

[Brianaswriting]

thanks :3

[Extant]

This has great images within, really beautiful. Though, I'm a bit lost on the fourth line with the rebelling...

[Brianaswriting]

thanks for your input :)

[Moon]

It make me think of some of my winter memories . In this piece you have done a good job of creating a picture of winter . Thank you for sharing .

[Brianaswriting]

and thank you for commenting c:

[Moon]

You are welcome .

[Cherrie Palmer]

what a soulful winter prelude served with coco

[Brianaswriting]

aww how cute thanks

[KAOlmsted]

I think it's a nice sentiment...for the most part. I got a little confused with this line: "...and friend return to your side demanding their pride." I must confess, I have no earthly idea what you mean by this. The structure is...unusual...but not unpleasantly so. The first line is exquisite. Thank you for sharing this with us.

-kimmer

[Brianaswriting]

thank you I wrote this in 10 minutes so I was rushing otherwise it would've been well written. Thank you for picking that up.

[KAOlmsted]

I never said it wasn't well written ;-) I enjoyed it, and the rewrite.

[Brianaswriting]

thank you very much :D

[Emberlorna]

Very heartwarming write. I really like this :}

[Brianaswriting]

thank you so much

[Emberlorna]

you're welcome :}