Chronicles of a Special Teenage Boy

 I woke up this morning and instantly saw a burst of reviving sunlight. I got out of bed and walked towards the rich light peaking out of the window's corner. A gloomy feeling hit me as I realized the first day of school was approaching. I wasn't thrilled about making my arrival and, setting my foot onto the first step while viewing Mattie hug Delia in front of me. A warm shot of blood ran through my veins as I slapped my hand against my cheek. Why did Mattie pretend to be straight for everyone else's sake? His parents would be outraged if they knew his secret, as would the rest of St.Peter High. He's such a role model to the student body, but I don't see why he has to act like he loves Delia in order to protect his levels of respect. I love Mattie with all my heart and soul, and I know he loves me too. Sure the break up was difficult but we'd still be together if it wasn't for Natalie, and Delia's twisted minds. What really hurt was that Mattie swore nothing could end our relationship. He promised there were no rules or limitations within our love, I didn't understand what that meant but I guess he meant we were as free as birds who could fly as far as we desired but at dusk we returned to each other. Enough allowing my brain to get off topic. I fell to the floor, and crawled back onto the bed. So many things to do today...mow the lawn, water the garden, finish my summer essay, post a journal entry and go out with Carly if I have the time. I went downstairs and my younger sister Amber was peering suspiciously from the back door. I trudged over to the fridge and flaunted the carton of milk while pressing it to my smooth pink lips. Amber fell into my trap and came running from her hideout. She lectured me on proper hygiene as I waved my fingers in her face. After a long breakfast that seemed more like a war zone I went outdoors to begin my numerous chores. 

 I hauled the lawn mower from the garage onto the grass, and wiped off the teeny bit of sweat on my eyebrow. As soon as I turned on the lawn mower 'it' zoomed by. I was afraid to look up because her sinister laugh was already echoing in my head. I kept my head down in fear, as it got off the bike. Delia bent her knees and coughed in my face while Natalie giggled from the street. 

 " You should just eat the grass boy, it'll get done faster that way."

  Delia returned to her bike and pedaled down the road. My temperature heightened, my skin became pale, and before any other changes could occur I went to my room. Delia, Natalie, and Mattie all knew not to upset me or dramatic issues would start. I limped to the bathroom, and ran some cold water. I looked up at the mirror and my eyes became a fiery reddish gold. My mouth dropped and my teeth stretched down into fangs. Great! I turned back into a werewolf because of those idiots! All I can do now is stay inside until mom gets home with the elixir. Sitting on the bathroom floor was like hell, so I dared myself to take a quick look outside and there across the street was a boy with long blond hair washing a car. I gazed at it him for about several minutes before he turned around. When i'm back to my old self I have to call Carly, and learn this guy's back round.

 

Reviews

[DrD]

This work flows nicely even in the absence of dialogue. I am not into vampires, werewolves, etc. so the ending was out of my realm but the mechanics of the work are very good and the descriptive quality stands out. A very nice job.

[Brianaswriting]

thank you so much your comment means a lot.