Alcoholic Mind

Alcoholic Mind

A Poem by Brian The Illiterate

Where am I ?

Who are you man ?

Gimmee a shot and a beer on my tab

What time is it ?

S**t now Im getting an earfull when I get home

Im not going there I wanna roam the streets dizzy

Plan my next step in life

Im gonna start working out again and quit smoking

This is the last night and this time I'm not joking

Im gonna make it right with my love

Shes gonna be proud of me and we're gonna be happy I know it

All those negative words are meaningless , I know thats not me

I need a beer

This is the last one

 

 

© 2008 Brian The Illiterate


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Great stuff here . I know this warped sence reasoning with ones self. The distruction that an alcoholic mind can generate is unmeasurable. GREAT WRITE!!!

Mr. Lopez

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Brian The Illiterate
Brian The Illiterate

Lawndale, CA



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