The Pit

 Where can I go and hide,
until the pain subsides?
My world is torn apart,
Do even care?
Do you see the silent tears,
The screams of my heart?
I'm dying inside,
does anyone see?
Life goes on around me,
I try to chime in.
My heart pulls me back,
It wont let me leave,
And ties me to the pain.
And I sink into the darkness,
And hide within.

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

A very descriptive statement about what the pit is like. There's always a light at the end of the tunnel. Always keep going. Great job!