Percieving "Reality"

Percieving "Reality"

A Poem by Kyle Breutigam

Desires swirl throughout my thoughts,

There’s one more thing to do before I leave.

 

Every word you speak is muted in silence,

Your gentle voice won’t make a difference.

My attention is focused on… shall we say more forbidden things.

 

In your silence I part my lips,

I pride myself on being heretical, but not tonight

Tonight my grammar fails me,

A slur of incoherent babble.

 

Your face holds so much sympathy.

Don’t pity me!

I know the truth, I am free!

 

Roses cover your bed of glass, deceitful are you not?

Hiding all your pain with pleasure.

Let go of all you know,

Severe all ties to the world.

 

Life is all a hallucination

We’re all just lucid dreaming.

© 2008 Kyle Breutigam


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ooohhh... sends a chill down my spine.... I like it! Feels so deep and mysterious- more!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very intriguing poem that can relate to almost anything. The more I read it, the more I get out of it. It lures you into his world and makes you wonder. Good job!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kyle Breutigam
Kyle Breutigam

Sarnia, Canada



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on the cold and blistery night inf September a poetically driven child was born into this world of hollow words of love and unfulfilled promise's. with a dictionary full of words and a mind full of id.. more..

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