Windy Days

Windy Days

A Poem by Brent
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A poem about self-inflicted isolation.

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If it weren’t for my own intrusion,
I’d play like in an amusement
park myself right on a bench
and work with the Sun’s infusion.
The warming rays would bring me joy
from days back when I was a boy.
When Legos were my favorite toy,
my world was lemon bright. 
 
But, only because I refuse,
and live here as a recluse
do these windy days seem to bring
only the lone messenger bird’s wing.

© 2017 Brent


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Infused by the sun is nice and true
and relates to the fun of the day.
Windy days aren't my desire unless it is steamy out and the wind brings a coolness to it.
an added stanza might address the relation between these two stanzas to conclude this...just my thoughts on it.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brent

7 Years Ago

Excellent input. I thought that the poem was cut off before it resolved that issue. I'll look into a.. read more



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Infused by the sun is nice and true
and relates to the fun of the day.
Windy days aren't my desire unless it is steamy out and the wind brings a coolness to it.
an added stanza might address the relation between these two stanzas to conclude this...just my thoughts on it.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brent

7 Years Ago

Excellent input. I thought that the poem was cut off before it resolved that issue. I'll look into a.. read more

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Added on August 21, 2017
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Tags: poetry, isolation, depression

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