Wise Again

They say I'm always sad..

They say I'm never happy

That I write with strife.

I say to them, on you go

For this is my life.

I know what I feel.

And it may be too blue.

But how else will I let go

of the bad things that I hold onto.

Trust me, I smile!

But those things don't need to be noted.

Because it would be a shame to store them in a poem.

You see, those times you must share!

Share them with those empty stares.

Remind them of the light. Remind them the beauty they have inside.

I am happy and I know this to be true-

Look, I just shared it with you.

Author's Note

People always tell me my poetry is dark, glum and sad.

Maybe their right... but I know happiness (: hopefully you can feel that here. I would love some criticism.

Reviews

[poetgurl]

love your opening lines, sounds like me some.
nice write, you express yourself well

[Relic]

My earlier attempts at poetry were always dark. Poems will always have mixed emotions by many different writers.

Nicely done Brenda. :)

[Zoya]

This is very much inspirational for the people who are kinda depressed, and yeah, as you said, who mostly write dark poetry. This is a simple theme yet you've made it look new to our eyes! The rhyming provided an extra edge. I truly liked it :)