'My final breath'

Somewhere 

I let all my defenses down

And never thought to turn around

Until you let your voice sound

You caught me so unaware

Honestly that wasn't fair

All I did was stand there

Looking back in despair

And you said ready or not

Here I come

And I found out

Nothing comes without a cost

And life was just a game we lost

All I have left is your song and your ghost

It feels like a bullet through the chest

Lay me down to rest

It's a lover's final breath

Author's Note

what do you think of my writing? am new at it.