It never lasts

Think of how

it used to be

you plus me forever

we claimed our friendship

would never end

it felt like a real promise to me

but why was it such a joke to you?

we said we wanted to do something good in life

well congratulations

because you accomplished leaving me behind

does it feel satisfactory? 

is that what you wanted?

we were forever

but forever is like nothing

the way you hangout

with all the "cool" kids

makes me feel sick

and to let you know,

you were better before.

Author's Note

please comment :)
tankss <3

Reviews

[Ben Taylor]

"well congratulations
because you accomplished leaving me behind"
Nicely written. It's fairly casual, but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
The emotion is tangible. Well done.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

This is very good. I can relate, as this type of behavior sometimes does not end. True friends can see when one is true to themselves. You are a gifted writer. The emotion of this piece is easily felt.