No one sleep walks better than water

I wish for my fellow writers to unserstand the metaphor I'm using in this.

I shall allow the water to sleep above me

As it is sleeping inside me.

It shall erode the stone I drag

And carry life unto me,

As it is carrying it inside me.

I don’t mind a tomb of flow,

I have sat on the dry for too long.

I shan’t drown.

No one sleep walks  better than waters

 

Reviews

[raj24]

BEAUTIFUL THOUGHT...WELL WRITTEN :)

[Latifa]

thank you so much for dropping by

[Coyote Poetry]

Sensitive and wonderful use of words my friend. Your words alive and strong. Making the reader feel and understand the words. I agree with your logic. Thank you Latifa for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

This is very nice Latifa, I'm really diggin' this!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Vivid imagination!
Creative peice with a powerful title"no one sleep walks better than water"
Keep writing:)

[Alfred Kukitz]

I see unique bubbles brewing in the mind of a friend. She is the scuba diver in poetic waters.

Bravo!

Regards,
Al

[Latifa]

thank you so much Alfred, your reviews keep me going :) :) i am most appreciative of them

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Sounds amazing to my ears. Very poetic . Lik dancing at midnight on the mountains

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

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You wellcome i realy like that poem

[Emily]

Lovely poem!!
Well done!!

[sushi]

Wow!!! I like it when i read "No one sleep walks better than water".

Wonderful write, thanks for sharing....

[An owl on the moon]

You speak a beautiful mystery in your words, dear poet. Water, how it cleanses, how it carries life within us, through us. I rather enjoy absorbing the secrets of each line and letting them utter their dreams.

[Latifa]

thank you Craig :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. It is mysterious. Kudos...:)...........

[Latifa]

thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome above and under water...:::)))))

[Latifa]

lol, tht's funny

[Sami Khalil]

::::))))))))))