rusting twilight

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Life rusting twilight,

mindfully beaking darkness,

shrugging off the days.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine write that sticks to all the haiku rules ; good one !

[wordman]

a transmission of life,with all it`s beauty and vivid colors,when night meets the day

[Coyote Poetry]

Life journey. We do need the night to regain strength. Thank you dear Latifa for sharing the excellent poetry. I hope you are having a safe and fun holiday.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Very unique are your imagery and imagination. You bring us powerful images to observe. Excellent...:)..............