white noise

please share with me your own white noise :)

White noise

Do not follow the clock.

It rebels  against  the hourly chimes of order.

It stays stagnant,

To kill you deafly.

It is not silence.

But white noise.

Only

 white noise.

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a vibrational pulling in your words that draws us into the sighs and sounds of the day, of all that reverberates across our minds and souls, and into that deeper place of haunting silence.

[Latifa]

thank you craig :)

[Woody]

white noise or dark thoughts. a turmoil going on when serenity seems to be reigning to the casual eye.
a very nice short piece. white noise. great choice.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[V]

I like the idea/the words white noise. This write leaves you musing, but I like it somehow. Even though I might not yet know what to gain from it but it just evoked feelings.

[Latifa]

what I mean by white noise is that obsessive silent thought that one suffer from, even when people around you thung that that there is silent, inside of you there is a ranging battle of those thoughts ruining your mood and life, that's what I suffered from when I wrote this piece.
thank you for the read :)

[V]

Ok, I'll try to imagine. ;) Thx for the explanation. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I feel this poem is describing boredom when time moves slow or chances are lost.I love it.:))))

[Latifa]

thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....:)))))

[Numidienne]

Not bad at all miss Latifa

[C. Rose]

Favorite lines: do not follow the clock, to kill you deafly.

I like "to kill you deafly" because it sounds like a pun "deafly" and "deftly". It also sounds scary to die in a muffled way where you can't even hear what's happening.

I like "do not follow the clock" because it makes me think of Alice and Wonderland and the Clockwork Orange. "Do not follow the clock," could be a cryptic message or mantra in a sci-fi fantasy world.

[Blue]

Perhaps it is brevity that says a lot. This short poem had me thinking about the meanings of your carefully chosen words. Good job, Latifa.

[Kaylee April]

A great description of time passing far too slowly. This is short and sweet and it makes me think about feeling like you are watching time pass when you feel like you are not able to do the things you want in life. I like the feel of this poem and how it sticks with you.
Best wishes,
Kay

[Ruth]

Time, the ruler of all...I like this piece a lot...has an energy and lingers...

[R Smith]

brilliant writing Latifa, my white noise is everything and the longing to find the silence of bliss and peace that we hold within our self, a day to long for :)