those stones

The waves have made a pact with the  stones,

You stand still.

While I’ll caress you with my  foamy ripples of love and care.

Just stand still and grab your fist to the ground.

The moon peeked  at the pact scene

From up, he declared :

You stand still and

I’ll cover you with that foamy blanket of love and care.

The waves winked at the moon :

“Thanks for the help uncle !”

We all love those stones,

We all love those shores.

The shores of   the land.

Our beloved land

Reviews

[Ruth]

Enchanting visuals here...a beautiful shimmer of life in communication :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Remarkable and imaginative conversation. Latifa you are in top form here!

Regards,
Al

[Mayank]

The imagery is literally charming... we generally move away from 'stillness' yet this has given all together new meaning to 'stillness'

[R Smith]

beautiful! the waves wash the stones clean every day, what greater love can there be, this poem is an inspiration to all, how simple it is to love each other and love our land too :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. My favorite place is the sea. I liked the story and the good description in your words. You gave life and vision to the reader. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

natures love story,soft and serene great write

[dexterous sam]

sometime it is difficult to depict image in other person brain if u are able to do that perfectly then you are exceptional poet....every single contrast is interesting ..relation between moon ,stones,waves,astonishing ...precise and best

[emptymind]

Quite an intriguing read. Very different and serene.