those stones

The waves have made a pact with the  stones,

You stand still.

While I’ll caress you with my  foamy ripples of love and care.

Just stand still and grab your fist to the ground.

The moon peeked  at the pact scene

From up, he declared :

You stand still and

I’ll cover you with that foamy blanket of love and care.

The waves winked at the moon :

“Thanks for the help uncle !”

We all love those stones,

We all love those shores.

The shores of   the land.

Our beloved land

Reviews

[Kaylee April]

lovely poem. I love the the imagery and "the waves winked at the moon" line. :)

[B]

Stones remind me of characters that outlived gruesome times

The shores of the land

Really quite an exquisite work of art

[Simon Welsh]

"Foamy blanket of love and care"

Damn.. I wish I came up with that.

[Emily]

I really like the first line!
Keep it up!

[Saddam]

Visualizing it so clearly..
Those stones are lovable.
Great one friend.

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!

[TL Boehm]

stasis and motion, the ebb and flow of tides and emotion - liked the wink to the moon. Well penned.

[Avinash]

It is a very original and beautiful pact between the wave and the stone. You have a nice imagination.

[AaronFreitas]

"You stand still.
While I’ll caress you with my foamy ripples of love and care."

Awesome words my friend... thanks for sharing :)

[An owl on the moon]

How your words awaken the world and enrich it with such vibrant visions! This loving glimpse at an ocean of loving is pure and precious to heart and soul, dear Latifa.

[Latifa]

thank you dearly Craig :)