Internal chaos

Internal chaos

A Poem by Latifa
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violating the principles of justice take it's toll on us slowly and cunnigly until our spirits become eroded with our own regrets specially those whom their mission in life is to serve justice.

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clatter, clatter , clatter

he who reigns with frozen devotions, only hears clatter,

alone, he stands to face the judgments of the internal chatter

oral arguments  hush, fall apart and scatter

silencing the sly hails  of the flatterer.

 

© 2015 Latifa


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Very nice, Latifa. Nicely constructed. Excellent message.

Greatly enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 9 Years Ago


Like the internal rhymes and alliteration..good one !

Posted 9 Years Ago


The message is loud and clear. Oral arguments as if in a court room has added power and justice. Excellent...:)...........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Latifa

9 Years Ago

thank you Sami :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly. .....:).......
you did a wonderful job on this write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good acrostic, Latifa, never had made one. Very well done. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


another acrostic, enjoy :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 28, 2015
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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