Randomness

little doodle, popped out and declare to written. I might edit it later, or there will be more poems coming out about this subject, enjoy.

randomness sits on the saddle
to whip the pendulum.
JERK IT OUT! the bored man says
give it little spice.

the order needs little jerking.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Randomness still is an unexplained phenomenon within the order we all observe. It lacks purpose and intelligibility. An excellent...:)......

[Latifa]

thank you Sami, I miss your reviews :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Much obliged.

[Mutasem Amayreh]

This is so philosophical, I would guess; yet, beautifully crossed over.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I find randomness mysterious, exciting & fun. I like your thinking Latifa. You have taken randomness into its own design.

Regards,
Al

[Mayank]

These randomness is catchy!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of thoughts. The poem made me smile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

a few lines with deep thoughts, well done. :) Rudi

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem made me think of Jackson Pollock.
There was nothing boring about this one.

[BlueDreams]

Wow an awesome poetry here :)
The title suggests that everything random is interesting :P :)

[R Smith]

shake it up a bit Latifa, you wrote a little winner here, it raises the need to spice up our lives (the bored man) a bit of randomness shows creativity, you really jerked the order of things here :)

[ANTO]

Stagnation is the enemy of creation. We all need jerking.
Let new things spill from the chaos
A philosophical piece here Latifa -
Glad for the RR, my friend.